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yeah, any time travel story does, it's hard not to.Episode submitted by ktlc34 on Fri Jun 17 05:00:29 2011 Return to Parent Episode yeah, any time travel story does, it's hard not to, but the point is that many well told stories have plot holes and they are still enjoyed only because they don't glare into them like a void that eats up all of the attention of the reader. What you've been doing is stealing attention from my story by pointing out that i somehow missed that Jon didn't want to be there, a point that is not important to my story. If you wanted that to be important you could start your own set of branches off an earlier part of the story. What you did is continually point out that flaw over and over off of my posts, when the story had nothing to do with that. Don't Pretend That Your Story is Separate | |
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