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Episode submitted by ktlc34 on Fri Jun 17 06:06:38 2011
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Your upset because I missed your story point and just wrote my own thing all day and in doing so i missed a minor plot point that someone else left out and in doing so created a continuity error. I didn't pay any heed to your corrections because they didn't fit into what i was trying to work towards and that also seemed to have made you mad. To be honest I was hoping you were telling your own story and was confused as to why you kept saying that Jon was going to go somewhere but didn't, cause it didn't seem to have much to do with what i was doing with completely different people in the story. I thought you were just doing your thing though and was hoping that it was going to go somewhere with it. Apparently you were trying to tell me that i missed something, even though i didn't pick up on that because it wasn't something that i saw as having a major import to the story that was being told or the place that i was trying to move my story to, which was that Athena was behind the whole thing. For not picking up on that I apologize.

I am upset because you made such a big deal out of trying to solve that error that you diverted attention from the story i was telling, and now my story is harder for people to read because of it. I even renamed my story to separate it from yours in order for you to give me space, but you didn't seem to want to do that. I want my story to be judged on it's merits, and with you pointing out this minor plot hole so persistently people are going to have a harder time enjoying my story than they would had you just left it alone. If people like the Cheer! thread that i am working on right now they are going to see your posts as a distraction from the main story and be confused as to why they are there. I very seriously doubt they are going to be thinking..."but wasn't Jon not going to go ten posts ago" when they are reading a story about a girl with self image problems or a former geek turned prom queen. The emperor may well be wearing no cloths in this story, but this isn't a story that features the emperor in a meaningful way, so having the town crier yelling that in the background isn't adding anything to a story.

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