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...Wha...?!

Episode submitted by Area82 on Tue Sep 6 06:16:23 2011
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First off, before I get on topic: Thank for the help, you guys! I really appreciate it. Vacation was pretty fun with the family, a few bumps here and there, but I enjoy myself and got a new game in the process.

Now, getting on topic...when I was reading the two episodes, I was completely shock and literally got up to pace while I wonder what the heck just happen! I'm sorry, I know that I shouldn't be really critical since you guys are being so nice to come to my aid and all, but this really blew my mind. I did say to add a few things here and there, as well as change a few things if it was needed, but I was not expecting this at all.

Mrs. Crawford (Vice Principal, not teacher) in the last episode "Typical students..." seems to be forcing the whole proposal down the students' throats and coming down as a figurally-speaking 'villain', even though she wasn't the type of person to be 'extreme' like that, even with a faint new sadistic side which she tried to hide. She want to encourage the student to wear clothes, but from what I had picture, she wasn't going to be tight about it either. The reward system would meant to ease the student in the direction without adding more rules.

And, considering the reward system was still rewarding the student for signing those notes anyway, it shouldn't really cause that kind of reaction, since they was doing that before the reward system and it won't really changed anything by much (I could imagined the reaction from Tiffany, but that was understanding, since she was in a foul mood and for good reason...somewhat).

Actually, looking at the meeting as a whole, I felt the whole meeting (as well as moment before it) was a bit rush...true, the meeting sub-plot shouldn't really be that long, but let take this for example: the only topics to pop up was the subject on splitting duties and the reward system, and I can only imagine there are more topics/issues than that (after all, this was their second school meeting...at least I think so). And, the subjects that was 'discussed' seems to felt more like it was shot at the school staffs very painfully without no mercy, rather than something to look at or explore.

...I really felt bad for posting this, especially since the story with the past and with Jon is doing great, but I can't just ignored this either. What do you guys think?

Chill..

Sorry... :/

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